01/09/2020
Power of Music
Music Cures Boredom Among Other Things
“One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.” ― Bob Marley
Music helps make life more enjoyable. If I didn’t have music I would die of boredom. Music makes life so much entertaining, even when it’s in the most boring time. Every day I wake up at 6:30 to get ready for school, and I leave on the bus at 7:10, but when I leave I’m still half asleep. The morning bus was one of the lows of all of my days. I just sit there, antisocial as everyone is when they are tired, but I have one things some kids don’t, I have the ability to listen to music. From “Pull Up” by: Lul Kel to “White Iverson” by: Post Malone. These song just brighten up my depressing morning bus rides in the best of ways. If I didn’t have music the morning bus rides could’ve ended worse, me falling asleep and no one waking me up, or something worse. The time that I’ve spent listening and loving music is uncountable. Not only does music keep you awake, but it tells you stories, wether it’s rap (which I like), classic, country, pop, etc. it all tells a story. If someone took music away from me I don’t know what I would do, because it just lightens up my day to the max. Through all the bus rides this year only one thing has always been there for me, music.
Nice job, I like how you described what it would be like without music, and what kind of music you listen to.
Posted by: Jack Doherty | 01/13/2020 at 07:12 AM
Good work, you make the reader relate to you and your depressing bus ride because, we all have those moments in our days. It make me, the reader more interested in the story which makes it all the more better.
Posted by: Andrew Crofton | 01/13/2020 at 07:17 AM
Your quote was pretty good, and I enjoyed how you explained how music can make you feel better when on the school bus and not that happy. Your conclusion sentence was pretty good too.
Posted by: Drew Callen | 01/13/2020 at 07:22 AM