A Morning’s Walk Through the Woods
05/13/2020
Think of a morning walk in the woods
Where the birds flutter
And the squirrels ricochet from tree to tree
And the brisk spring wind blows around you
Making the trees sway from side to side
Now look down
And make sure you don’t trip on the roots
Or get pricked by the prickers
Or get brushed by the poison ivy
Follow the path through the woods
And see the vultures soaring above
And see the bugs cross the path at your feet
Now make your way home
And start the day
Your Poem took me with you on your walk, Like you were a guide on a nature walk. Every new stanza was a new thing to look at. Great job!
Posted by: Niko Weaver | 05/15/2020 at 07:46 AM
Grayson, the details and the descriptive adjectives in this poem make every line very vivid, which allows the reader to embark on quite the journey before the work day starts. Well done!
Posted by: CJ Bailey | 05/15/2020 at 08:36 AM
You used great imagery throughout this entire poem. It really made me feel like I was actually there with you. Nice job, Grayson!
Posted by: Christopher Lando | 05/15/2020 at 08:40 AM
Words could not describe how great this poem is, Mr Malitsky. You truly captured what it’s like to be on a morning walk, with your highly descriptive and specific language. I look forward to reading more of your poems in the future. 10/10 in my books!
Posted by: Ben Paradis | 05/15/2020 at 09:33 AM