Primitive Dialogue
10/03/2018
It Doesn’t Work
By Matthew, Luke and Tim
“It’s not working?”
“How many times do I have to tell you, it’s out of power. Maybe you shouldn’t have taken that joyride to steal George Washington’s cherry tree!
“Well it’s not my fault that those cherries are so good.”
“What year is it anyway, John?”
“Ummm.. about 300 million years B.C., the Jurassic period.”
“You’re saying we’re stuck here with dinosaurs?”
“Basically, yes. Though we could possibly use T-Rex urine as a fuel source! It’s high in carbohydrates!”
“Sounds simple enough, we just need to steal T-Rex urine.”
“I’m guessing there’s probably one T-Rex over by the watering hole, over there!”
“Sounds good, I’ll grab this chankahankagluey leaf, and you grab that sharp rock.”
“Quickly, put the leaf to his nose!”
“Wow he’s falling asleep!’
“Ok, now stab his face.”
“Ok!”
“Now give me the rock so I can harvest the bladder.”
“Nice work Jimmy! Now we can get back to our time!”
“Thanks so much John!”
Interesting writing peice. It really started to take a turn toward the end and the Dino seemed like a great food source
Posted by: Andrew heinze | 10/04/2018 at 09:55 AM
This is a very creative approach to the assignment. It made laugh super duper hard.
Posted by: Oscar Patton | 10/04/2018 at 09:57 AM
Very cool. Very intriguing stiry
Posted by: Conor Kennealy | 10/04/2018 at 10:00 AM
Great wording in the essay I was a little confused on the start of the story but other then that I was very interesting on how they were back in the Jurassic time.
Posted by: Daniel Haines | 10/04/2018 at 10:00 AM
I like the approach you took by bringing the characters back to Jurassic period. The dialogue is good between the characters.
Posted by: Tucker | 10/08/2018 at 04:18 PM
Very interesting story Matthew, I do like how you approached this though it was a little short. Good job over all though.
Posted by: Michael A | 10/11/2018 at 08:47 AM